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Sunday, July 15, 2012

doubt

Vettriano, Jack, Yesterday's Dreams

again and again
i am always on that
bedroom window waiting...

waiting
with no assurance.
if you are still coming back.

'til this morning
with a long sigh
i decided,
no more to this.

and with a little smile
i went back to bed.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

if doubt  is stronger
than your love for each other,
there is no reason
to keep it...

posted for Magpie Tales [link]
photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid [link]


28 comments:

  1. your words are so true..lovely write...x

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  2. agree at relate much haha
    my gf always doubts me with no reason darn and its getting on my nerves but because i love her i just have to understand her she just love me that much maybe

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  3. Sure, I would go back to sleep ~

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  4. I learnt a lesson in all. True anyways!

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  5. sad but truthful ...thanks for sharing x

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  6. Dear JJ; "No doubts" ever...only LOVE:)))

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  7. oh how I remember those long waitings... I like this one's "little smile", & sound advice in the final stanza - well done

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  8. ParengJJ
    Rightly said! In fact not the slightest at all. Wonderful write, Pareng!

    Hank

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  9. Waiting is the pits- as a youth or an adult...thanks

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  10. how often have we stood at that same window questioning, hoping, waiting? windows have long been metaphors for something deeper...great write!

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  11. strong women to let it go and go back to bed. I also like your quote at the end of your post.

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  12. and perhaps that is for the best....but you know you will never get to sleep until they get home...

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  13. Doubt and love can never go hand in hand ... thanks for writing :-)

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  14. It’s so important to trust one another.

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  15. A beautiful poem and quote. Words to live by... but it's so hard to dc so.

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  16. Back to bed, yes. Back to sleep? Not so much.

    Well done.

    =)

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  17. JJ so nice to meet you
    I appreciate the truth in your statement
    so easy to give love away / sadly it is not always returned

    your work is excellent / keep writing from the heart

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  18. Seems like the perfect way to deal with the situation!

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  19. but what will you dream of? :)

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    1. i am now living the dream... i have found the person who will never let me wait and wait and wait... good i decided to stop waiting then... thanks! tried to visit your link but i cannot get in...

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  20. if your doubt is stronger
    than your love for each other,
    there is no reason
    to keep it...

    I couldn't agree more. If it's meant to be, things will go smoothly.

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