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Sunday, July 29, 2012

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image by Zelko Nedic
loosing someone
that you have
been used to,
is difficult.

someone you have
cared for,
and cared for you
in return.

someone who
raised you
to be the good man
you are  now.

but it is more difficult
to choose
the next person
to fill in the shoe
that your good master left.

and for you,
is it worth
to trust that someone,
that you just met
loitering in the dark?

posted for Magpie Tales [link]
photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid [link]

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Have a blessed Sunday
and great week ahead!


22 comments:

  1. this is excellent- a dog's view...well put!

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  2. to lose someone is hard ~ nice perspective here ~

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  3. I always enjoy the different "takes" to the prompts at Magpie Tales. This is very dog sensitive. I like that.

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  4. Everyone is kinda sad today...I guess this dog evokes that...

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  5. smiles...it is hard to lose someone...and it can wreck your world and trust in others...and is hard to reach out once more for fear of that hurt again....

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  6. This is beautifully thoughtful and reading it once wasn't enough...

    Thank you.

    Anna :o]

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  7. Yes you did well with this piece.

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  8. This is both sensitive and sweet, JJ. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoy my visits here. =D

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  9. Very forlorn... but your words come together beautifully.

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  10. Very sweet and sad. Nicely written.

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  11. Jj this was wonderful
    loved the point of view

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  12. Loved hearing from the dog :)

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  13. ParengJJ
    No, not to trust just anybody. A wonderful twist to the prompt, Pare!

    Hank

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  14. Sometimes we have to be careful who is standing behind us! But then there is that off chance that it can someone incredible. Very nice take on the image!

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  15. wonderful to hear the dog speak. Lovely.

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  16. i agree to this i used to have that feeling

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  17. Need makes one lose caution...

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  18. You are right - a leap of faith! Well-described. k.

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