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Sunday, November 20, 2011

The First Kiss

what a very
silly situation that was.
we were seated 
in your red ford pick up truck.

after a long walk 
from the blue jays way
to wellesley parking lot.

After seeing each other
for the first time
and the 6 hours
of being together


and walking around the
city of Toronto.
not mentioning the unusual 
introduction of one's life...

i cannot stop myself
from kissing you.

a kiss that brought me
to this wonderful beginning with you.

posted for Magpie Tales Photo Prompt #92
photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid

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31 comments:

  1. This poem makes me very happy! Thanks, I'm glad I got to read it :o)

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  2. ParengJJ,
    A first kiss and it all happened at an accepted pace of progress.It was not rushed nor forced. It will linger on in memory whatever happens! Great write!

    Hank

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  3. ah yes- so very familiar this flavor of new love

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  4. Wow!
    As the recipient, this poem melts my heart. Thanks my love!

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  5. So romantic...amazing how love can make beautiful fools of us

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  6. Some times the silliest of situations have the most rewarding results!!! Nice job.

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  7. Wonderful beginnings are the very best kind!

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  8. Great. Silly is the best kind of wonderful.

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  9. Great details! good take on people,thanks.

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  10. a kiss can be a great beginning and sometimes irresistable when you get that feeling...

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  11. I hope it is the beginning of a wonderful love story.

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  12. Just wonderful..falling in love is so great!! And only 6 hours...(sometimes 6 minutes)!

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  13. Who doesn't love the honeymoon phase...

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  14. from Kitchener-waterloo, hello:) I enjoyed this.

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  15. A wonderful beginning, indeed! Very lovely write.

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  16. That's a nice take on the prompt. I've been struggling with this week's prompt myself... I hope I can think up something pertinent for it, eventually...

    Cheers...

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  17. I look forward to not being able to stop kissing someone, but I need to find the someone to kiss. A lovely love poem.

    Love,
    Lola

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  18. The silly awkwardness of it all ending with the impassioned kiss. What a dance, eh? Enjoyed this!

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  19. That first kiss
    is the best.
    No matter how good
    the rest!
    rel
    http://pciyrtpy.blogspot.com/

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  20. Dear JJ: "I can't stop myself from kissing you"...hmmm..Love the passion! WoW! You portrait the excitment of romance to a "t". If only...i were 20 again(sighs):)Chiccoreal

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  21. Ahhhh, yes, we all remember our first kiss, don't we? Good post!

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  22. i like how you set this up in the pick up truck. must have been a very wide lens to get this view. ;)

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  23. Nice magpie. I love how you built a story around the image.

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