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Sunday, January 15, 2012

Last Breath

Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 100
Hippity Hip
sculpture: Jason de Caires Taylor


Start
Dream
Struggle
Fall...

Start again
Dream again
Struggle again
Fall again...


It keeps 
repeating that way, and...

I thought
I would continously drown
But even before
I had my last breath
You pulled me out of the water

Out and up to where
It is bright
And full of fresh air...

Another chance of life...
Another glimpse of hope...
Another look of love...

Posted for Magpie Tales
Photo Courtesy of Tess Kincaid

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this prompt just coincides with what is happening in my life now...
waiting for JC to pick me up.
we are going to buy the furnitures
and some of the things listed
on my wish list for our new place.

God bless us all...

Happy and Blessed Sunday everyone!
and have a great week ahead too!..

23 comments:

  1. Nicely done. The repetitions at the beginning and end work well.

    =)

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  2. ParengJJ,
    I like your style here. It keeps the concern alive all the way but acknowledging a progress for the better along the way.Great write ParengJJ!

    Hank

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    1. nice...it can feel like that...and in our darkest hour comes one to save us....love it...have fun buying furniture...

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  4. Lovely -- thanks for the bright start for my morning.

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  5. now...I say...could anyone be anymore happy?
    lovely magpie
    lovely new life together....happy shopping..hope you have the same taste in decorating!

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  6. nice when there's always a fresh start..a new hope..the look of love...smiles..made my mind wonder to that song... enjoy buying the furniture

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  7. we all need to be saved some time!! have a great day shopping..happiness shines through..x

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  8. I like the progression of this. Good luck with the shopping!

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  9. Lovely - another chance is a good thing!

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  10. Beautiful! This could speak to people on so many levels! Love it! :)

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  11. I love the progression from despair to hope...I hope your shopping trip was successful!

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  12. Another chance! Hope! If everyone could be so lucky.

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    1. Happy Day! I am glad you were lifted up back into the air! happy furniture hunting too- it can be fun!

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  13. Nice sequencing through the poem.

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  14. Oh to be pulled out of the water...this made me happy...

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  15. I really enjoyed your poem. I liked the persistence of it. Thank you for sharing this. It is an inspiration to keep trying.

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  16. This is so good. The structure gives a lot to it. Lovely.

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  17. Dear JJ: A lovely concrete poem of words like water with a heart beat! Unique and so very refreshing this positive spin~

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