Back when I was close to you
Back when we use night markets
As our rendesvouz.
Scattered Clothes, cd's, dvd's
Foot wears and even adult toys
Hanging ducks, chickens
And all kinds of meat too.
Roaming there is fun...
It is exciting!
Hiding ourselves over the seller's stalls
Avoiding people that we knew.
But at the end of it
The moment we sit in our secluded spot
As we stare, hug and kiss
Pays off every single minute of wait.
The photo prompt #87 of Magpie Tales
Courtesy of Miss Tess Kincaid
Reminded me of my nights back when
I was stil in Taipei, Taiwan...
My new selfmade music video... hahaha... [link] I'll Take Care Of You
and my new pictures [link] Playing on the leaves
Have fun guys! Blessed sunday!
secret meetings....always fun.
ReplyDeletehave a wonderful sunday my friend
I like the cheer you found in hiding, and how "Hard to do it with iPad" mixed into the poem, as part of its spontaneous feel.
ReplyDeletelively market romp!
ReplyDeleteI like this! Great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteOh, I like the way you used the prompt! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteSorta went to my history too...
ReplyDeleteSpicy...sexy...nice...
ReplyDeleteI always like it when you write about something that makes (or made) you happy, JJ. I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteKay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Wow. I easily fall in this kind of poetry. Thumbs up! :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem is filled with sweetness and tenderness ... I love the evoking of old feelings.
ReplyDeleteDear JJ: There is a definite thrilling feeling here- an exotic yet known locale and the excitment of a new romance;
ReplyDeleteas we stare hug and kiss
Really enjoyed those memories as I share these feelings along with you. Chiccoreal
Clandestine lends more heat than the sun. Nice!
ReplyDeleteHmmm, I think your recent separation may have influenced the way you interpreted the image. In any case, it is a wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteNight markets, food stalls, pirated discs ... laughter, fun - great piece!
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the photo... enjoyed reading this one :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
We need some night markets in America,
ReplyDeletethat is way obvious. We kind of have some
but obviously none with the energy and
allure of your nights in Tapaei. A very
romantic and heartfelt romp, sir.
@ David Allen Waters, i use to date a co-worker there. not that it is not allowed but we kind of wanna keep it secret. which added to the thrill of the relationship...
ReplyDelete@ Kathy Bischoping, hehehe... i know... thanks!
@ Kathe W, thank you!
@ Mama Zen, thank you!
@ Other Mary, Thank you!
@ christopher, there you go... LOL! thanks!
@ Tess Kincaid, anything sexy is cute and fun... LOL!
@ Kay L. Davies, thank you maam. feel like a sister to me too. they always want to hear anything fun and happy from me.
@ pointlessparanoia, thank you!
@ The Old raven, thank you maam... :-)
@ chiccoreal, hugs sister. thank you!
@ Thumblewords, thank you...
@ Nicholas V., indeed sir! thank you!
@ Isabel Doyle, thank you!
@ Arnab Majumdar, thank you!
@ Morning, Thank you!
@ Glenn Buttkus, LOL! for sure... those were the nights that people need to get some little spice. hehehe... thanks!